My Thriller Narrative

In my production we are following the life of a man, who's family have been taken. We begin by seeing some drops of something and just hearing the sound of the drops. These shots fade in and out, separated by the Titles.

During these scenes of droplets and tile we see a man running down a alley, this makes the audience wonder what's happening: what are the droplets and who is the man. The whole thing continues until the final drop which is red. The screen then fades to red which in turn pans out from the side of a car. Then there are a couple of scenes while the phone conversation goes on, these show the man receiving a case and driving to his destination.

Then conversation then stops and the man starts walking down the country roads. He reads a letter left buy the man on the phone. This is while mans voice is reading it for the audience. He then starts to dig and throws the case inside. The audience are then moved to a point of view shot from the case as it gets buried. The spade gets thrown into the ground and instantly the news report starts about some one being missing.